Speaker critique of george lucas inspirational speech assignment

He also give detail about how to choose what you want to study in college. That means he noticed his audience are mainly student. In the first sentence of his introduction, he introduced Indiana Jones and other people that help him write this story and made the movie. This is a good idea to developing interest of audience and makes them feel he is a modestly person. That could help audience pay attention to his speech. Also, he mentioned what he will talk about in his speech. He give two clear point. All of these method using makes this speech really effective.

One thing I think he could improve is interact with some audience by ask some questions like. That would makes introduction more effective. He gave many support material in his speech. The most important part is example or his personal life experience. He give suggestion to audience that not do what your parent think you should do, do it inside of you. Because his father don’t want him to do anything about art and movie. He actually get succeed in movie industry. He also use repetition in his speech as support material, he said not do what peers think you should do, not do what your parents think you should do.

That is more important than use complicate and beauty language because he know the target of the speech is to give advice to audience. There is not grammar error in his speech that makes his speech more credible and effective. His main point is pretty clear because of the use of simple word and sentence. Do what you like to do and live with happiness are the main point in this speech. His voice is comfortable and the speed is appropriate for audience to understand his opinion. He talked by using peaceful tone in his speech. It is like the regular talk between parents to kids.

This is effective for audience to accept these suggestion. He talked not too loud could help audience accept is suggestions with positive mood. He always use different gesture to enhance his statement. That’s effective to help audience to understand what he is talking about and his attitude about his talking about. He also keep eye contact to gain attention from audience. He put both of his hand on table means he feel pretty relax and confident in speech. That’s also bring the credible for audience and makes audience accept his suggestion easier.